[PLUG] Flier feedback from the meeting

Rick rdoyle16+plug at gmail.com
Fri Jul 6 21:33:44 UTC 2012


Not sure if you are looking for proofreading-type feedback, but just in
case...

   - Page 1, left column, 3rd paragraph... I'm guessing that the first word
   should be "Our" (not "Out").

Overall, I think the flyer looks great so far... any other comments I would
have would simply be my personal preferences (and very nitpicky ones, at
that) - the preferences of each of us would surely be different... so, I
choose to let your decisions be authoritative on these matters - since you
are the one that put in the effort to do this in the first place.  :-)

Nice work... and thanks!

On Fri, Jul 6, 2012 at 1:39 PM, Michael Dexter <dexter at ambidexter.com>wrote:

> On 7/6/12 1:15 PM, John Jason Jordan wrote:
> > The flier never made it to me. Can you post it somewhere?
>
> http://pdxlinux.org/WhyPortlandBeta.pdf
>
> Michael
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